I like how your story refers to the title a lot of time. Oberon is the grandfather right? Your story is full or description so it is easy for me to understand:)
Hehe, well Oberon is not related to Madeleine... He is the antagonist. Oberon is just really angry at Madeleine because her great great grandmother killed his great great grandfather.
Awesome quotes! You know like 'The past is in the past' in Frozen, Let it go. Also, 'Leave, child, before I change my mind' from Gravity Falls. Also, I could clearly see what was going on, and the characters are not too complicated, so they are easy to follow, and understand. Are you sure you aren't related to J.K. Rowling? Cause I'm pretty sure you are. :) You should publish this someday.
I like how your story refers to the title a lot of time.
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Your story is full or description so it is easy for me to understand:)
Hehe, well Oberon is not related to Madeleine... He is the antagonist. Oberon is just really angry at Madeleine because her great great grandmother killed his great great grandfather.
DeleteAwesome quotes! You know like 'The past is in the past' in Frozen, Let it go. Also, 'Leave, child, before I change my mind' from Gravity Falls. Also, I could clearly see what was going on, and the characters are not too complicated, so they are easy to follow, and understand. Are you sure you aren't related to J.K. Rowling? Cause I'm pretty sure you are. :) You should publish this someday.
ReplyDeleteThank you! You make me feel SO much better about my story. I thought I did bad :P
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