Good job! I like your thinking. You can easily connect back to the evidence. But, you need more thinking. Most of it is telling us what the thing is talking about.-Sophie
each paragraphs was really detailed and it was really interesting unlike someone(me)
Good job! I like your thinking. You can easily connect back to the evidence. But, you need more thinking. Most of it is telling us what the thing is talking about.
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each paragraphs was really detailed and it was really interesting unlike someone(me)
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