Goal #2

What: improve the organization of my writing pieces

How: by putting in paragraphs in my writing pieces


December 13, 2012

Monday to Wednesday (almost the whole week) we have been doing essay projects and in all of my little pieces if I was writing a little story or something I put paragraphs in all of them. On Tuesday I was writing a story at home and put paragraphs in the story.


December 19, 2012

This week our class has been doing essays and in my essay I tabbed each paragraph. It looked a lot more organized with paragraphs.


January 14,2013

I am writing a book at my house and each time I write a page and plan it out either it is the final story or the draft I always made sure I put a paragraph when needed.

January 23,2013

Monday to Thursday( basically the whole week) I have been writing a story and everyday when I improved it I remembered to put paragraphs when needed.


February 19,2013

At school our class are writing poems and in the poems I did not understand how to organize it by putting line breaks so I basically made into a paragraph but, I did put paragraphs.


February 25,2013

In class we are still are on our poetry unit so you do not use paragraphs in poetry so, I obviously did not put paragraphs in my poems since I knew poems are not written like a paragraph. So, since there is no time to do paragraphs in our writing unit in writing I was sent a mini story by a friend and it had no paragraphs so I got an idea of writhing a similar story and I remembered to put paragraphs.


March 5,2013

I am starting to write a book at home called My Father Is A Vampire. It is a picture book so I do not put paragraphs. Though, when I was drafting I saw how it looked when I put it in a paragraph form. I remembered to indent.