I like how you able to do the voice over thing it was really interesting. However I think while you were putting up all the signs you could have had more expressions. But I also like how in your video you were able to give us a lot of good information.
Great job! I really liked how you put a very clear history and said all the chemicals and what they do. One thing you could've worked on was saying some of the active chemicals. Another thing was you were very entertaining and you had a loud clear voice.
I really liked how you made a voiceover instead of talking into the video. I think you should've included more history about your specific product, but everything was good, like how you held up dates.
I LOVE this video, Mina! I love how you used hand motions and pictures, too. My favorite was how you used the images on pages while you did the voice over. One thing you could work on is maybe describing a little bit more of the chemicals, especially the dangerous ones. You did FANTASTIC! Great work, Mina!
I loved the thought and editing that was put into the video. I do recommend talking about the chemicals more. But, that is a small fraction of the video, everything else was awesome!
I like how you did the airplane thing were people would do the hand gestures and someone else speaks. The only problem was it wasn't loud enough until the ingredient part . Overall it was good and it was very descriptive with the history
I like how there was a voice over and also how you like acted out what was going on. Although I thought that you should stand in front of the video instead of hiding in the corner, but good job. Another reason that I liked it was because you had lots of info and it fit in 2:00 mins.
This was a funny video and I loved the way she explained it.
ReplyDeleteI approve of the way she talked clearly
Nice job on the history. It was really good. Maybe have you talk a bit more happier. But other then that it was good.
ReplyDeleteI think that you had an elaborate history,but you could have have talked a bit slower for the last part.Good Job!
ReplyDeleteYour video was nice, I liked how you acted and brought out signs with the dates while you did a voice over. It was really cool.
ReplyDeleteI like how you able to do the voice over thing it was really interesting. However I think while you were putting up all the signs you could have had more expressions. But I also like how in your video you were able to give us a lot of good information.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I really liked how you put a very clear history and said all the chemicals and what they do. One thing you could've worked on was saying some of the active chemicals. Another thing was you were very entertaining and you had a loud clear voice.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you made a voiceover instead of talking into the video. I think you should've included more history about your specific product, but everything was good, like how you held up dates.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE this video, Mina! I love how you used hand motions and pictures, too. My favorite was how you used the images on pages while you did the voice over. One thing you could work on is maybe describing a little bit more of the chemicals, especially the dangerous ones. You did FANTASTIC! Great work, Mina!
ReplyDeleteI loved the thought and editing that was put into the video. I do recommend talking about the chemicals more. But, that is a small fraction of the video, everything else was awesome!
ReplyDeleteI like how you did the airplane thing were people would do the hand gestures and someone else speaks. The only problem was it wasn't loud enough until the ingredient part . Overall it was good and it was very descriptive with the history
ReplyDeleteI liked it because it had lots of info in a short time
ReplyDeleteIt was also good because you knew how to say the chemical names
I like how there was a voice over and also how you like acted out what was going on. Although I thought that you should stand in front of the video instead of hiding in the corner, but good job. Another reason that I liked it was because you had lots of info and it fit in 2:00 mins.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used the paper timeline although I thought that you could've made it shorter so that you didn't have to talk rushfully at the end
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said the chemicals properly (a rare skill), and how you said their uses.
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